Here’s my contribution to this week’s Monday’s Finish the Story. And yes, the names are inspired by the Penguins of Madagascar.. 🙂
Finish the story begins with “When the team heard the dam explode, they knew they had limited time to make it to safety.”
“Go go go!”
Skipper turned quickly to look behind him as they raced to get clear of the deluge. Too late. “Brace!”
Throwing down their useless oars they hunkered down, head between knees, as the wall of water hit them. The raft spun out of control.
They slammed into a partially submerged rock, throwing Kowolski into the water. His wet fingers scrambled to grip onto the raft, but the current pulled him under in seconds.
The sound of the waterfall became a deafening roar as they raced toward the edge of the river. The raft flew over the edge, dipping into the foaming rush of water as its helpless occupants were flung out to their fate.
Time slowed down for the three bodies as they fell, arms flailing, lungs burning, to the bottom of the rainbow, and into the arms of the awaiting rescue crew.
Thanks goodness for the rescue crew. Didn’t think it was going to end well for them.
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I was in a good mood when I wrote it :p
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Ha ha 🙂
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LOL! I think the people on the raft were very grateful you were in a good mood when you wrote this. Hahaha! Great tension throughout the story and of course, I loved your good mood ending! 😀
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Thankyou Joy, I’m glad you prefer the happier ending! 🙂
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I really think I do. It helped my morning be a little brighter. 😀
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Haha- glad to hear it!
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Love the last line. I’m just hoping they were still alive when the rescue team pulled them out. I feel sorry for Kowolski – maybe he made it though!
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Thanks! And he made it, they all did- nothing bad ever happens under a rainbow! :p
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I’ve gotta echo what draliman said. Then I’ll add that you made me smile this morning. Thanks for that.
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Aw they all made it, though possibly not unscathed 🙂 Thanks for reading, and glad you enjoyed it!
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Good thing the rescue team was there! Thank you for participating in the Mondays Finish the Story challenge and I hope that you return next week! Be well… ^..^
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Thanks Barbara, and thanks for an awesome prompt once again 🙂
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YW! I am going through photos today for next week’s challenge. Would you like to suggest a topic?
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Ooh.. Well we’ve had water this week, so how about the desert? Or maybe a market scene with some food involved etc? 🙂
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I will check out what I have in that way…I know that I might have something when we were in Mazatlan. I definitely have food photos as I do recipes too on my LitF site…
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Great, otherwise let me know I might have some desert and market shots from my travels..
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Got a food photo picked out! Should be good! Keeping my fingers crossed!
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looking forward to it!
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Yay, unexpected happy ending! I like “falling to the bottom of the rainbow”.
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Thanks Sonya 🙂 I got the image in my head as most waterfalls have rainbows attached to them..
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Certainly touch and go for the crew as they rushed towrds the waterfall. Thank goodness for the rescue team! Lovely descriptiom of them falling to ‘the bottom of the rainbow’. 🙂
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Thankyou Millie, glad you enjoyed it! 🙂
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It’s definitely a good job the rescue team was there! Hopefully none of them have any injuries worse than bumps and bruises. Great story. 🙂
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Thankyou! Yes they all made it- alive anyway :p
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A happy ending! Wonderful writing, and when I read that the names had been inspired by the Madagascar penguins, in my imagination, the characters were not human.
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Thanks Francesca! I kept picturing the Penguins in my head too as this is just the kind of scenario they’d get themselves into 🙂
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Those lucky, lucky guys will live to make another film.
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Great ending ~ A very nice finish to a great suspenseful write ~
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Thanks John!
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I was unable to reply to your last comment on this post. Be that as it may, thank you for suggesting a topic for next Monday’s challenge. How does Pizza sound? There will be pizza in the next MFtS in response to you asking for a market or food shot and opening line! Thank you Tasty for your suggestion! Be well… ^..^
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That could be fun- quite a few possibilities there! 🙂
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