Monday’s Finish the Story- Midnight Brew


Here’s my contribution to this week’s Monday’s Finish the Story, brought to us by Barbara Beacham.

Finish the story begins with:  “The barista shook his head. That hedge couldn’t have moved closer overnight. Could it?”

Ever since they’d been selling the new coffee, the customers were complaining about its unusual side effects. That they were seeing fuzzy outlines around trees, and shadows flitting at the edge of their vision. Some people were even talking to dead relatives. The barista didn’t believe in such things, so when one of the regulars bet him $50 to drink a double espresso, he just thought that it was easy money. Except now he wasn’t so sure. The coffee came in a small black bag  with a name, and nothing else. “Midnight Brew.” He hesitated, twirling the tiny espresso glass before taking a sip of the  thick black brew. Heartbeat quickened, pupils dilated, everything came into sharp focus. It tasted of chocolate, and flowers, of his first kiss, of mothers milk, of tears, and of life itself. He shook his head and blinked. Was the topiary hedge waving at him?

17 thoughts on “Monday’s Finish the Story- Midnight Brew

  1. I wonder if someone was using the coffee to smuggle in drugs and ended up stealing back actual normal coffee at the destination, leaving their “shipment” to go to a coffee shop 🙂
    Cool story, lots of possibilities here!

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  2. Wow! That was some coffee trip. LOL! To re-experience all those things, including mother’s milk it has to be some pretty powerful stuff. On top of all that, the hedge is waving at him. This Midnight Brew needs to stay on the shelf it will sell like hotcakes! Haha!

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